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The
Look Book Project for Beginning
Writers
Julia
Karet from California
Julia
Karet is Professor of ESL at the English
as a Second Language
Program
at Chaffey
Community College.
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Photo
from Julia Karet
I
started to search for a meaningful project
that would provide some real world purpose
for the often tedious task of learning the
grammar and sentence combining skills that
form the basis of English writing at this
level. I came up with the idea of
producing a class "look book" in which the
students would share information about
themselves and their lives.
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A
Bit of History
I teach ESL at Chaffey Community College in
southern California. The editor of this e-zine
(TOPICS), Sandy Peters, and I worked together in
Japan for two years. It was there that we both
became fascinated by the idea of using the www to
enhance our teaching. We both left Japan with the
basic skills needed to produce www pages and tons
of ideas for inspiring students.
My
first attempt at using what I learned in my new
environment was in an advanced writing
(Fundamentals of Composition) class. The
technical aspects were so frustrating (see
Processing Process Paragraphs for Publication: A
Teacher's Tale in this Teacher's Corner)
that it still amazes me that we managed to pull it
off.
What's
a Look Book?
After a year of teaching advanced writing in a
computer classroom, I was assigned the beginning
level writing (Sentence Structure) class,
and I returned to a traditional "paper and pencil"
classroom. For a while it was a relief, but then I
began to miss the stimulation that an internet-rich
environment provides.
I
started to search for a meaningful project that
would provide some real world purpose for the often
tedious task of learning the grammar and sentence
combining skills that form the basis of English
writing at this level.
I
came up with the idea of producing a class "look
book" in which the students would share information
about themselves and their lives. The purpose of
the writing project was to give students an
opportunity to expand what they were learning into
writing real paragraphs for real audiences. It is,
after all, easy for beginning writers to get
discouraged and lose sight of the fact that the
skills they are learning can really be used to
communicate in English.
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Photo:
Karet Karet
Some of Julia Karet's students writing
their stories for a Look Book
project.
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For
the look book, each student wrote an introduction
of a classmate and a narrative about some event
that changed his/her life in some way. The
introductions gave them the chance to get to know a
classmate and then to share that information with
others using the two present verb tenses they had
studied.
Then
the students were asked to write a story about a
significant life event. The narratives they wrote
practiced the simple past and past progressive
tenses, transitions and adverbial clauses while
providing an opportunity for creative
self-expression.
What
I found amazing was the variety of tales they told.
Some students wrote about coming to America while
others shared deeply personal, and sometimes
painful, life events. Still others wrote about
travel adventures, good luck, and personal
triumphs.
Production
Logistics
In
the printed booklet, each student has his/her own
page with a photograph, the introduction written by
a classmate, and their own story. As part of the
process, students brainstorm, interview each other,
share their stories, work on revisions together,
edit their own work etc. In other words, they learn
first-hand what goes into writing for an audience.
To
date, my classes have produced two look books. In
fall 1999, the students named their look book,
Friends
Around the
World.
In spring 2000, the students decided on the title,
One Language, Different Cultures. The covers
were designed by students, and each semester the
look book was distributed at an authors' reception
(see photo) on the last day of class.
The
students' self-satisfaction and pride are evident
as they open the printed version of the books for
the first time. In addition to building students'
confidence in their writing ability, the project
facilitates bonds of friendship across cultures and
ages. (My classes are very diverse with students as
young as 17 and as old as 70. They are also
heterogeneous in terms of cultures, languages,
educational levels, and economic status. )
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The
first Look Book was designed by Tracy
Yu.
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From
Print to Ezine
TOPICS has published selections from the
look books online, enabling the students to reach a
much wider audience with their stories. I have
simplified the print-to-online transfer process
that presented so many technical problems in the
beginning by pressing a CD of the text and photos
for the TOPICS editors.
In
addition, I am lucky to have in-class help from an
advanced ESL student-tutor who does all the
photography, inputting and formatting. (Teachers be
forewarned - these tasks are very labor intensive!)
The
Future
In fall 2000, my beginning writing class is moving
back to a newly-renovated computer classroom. Now,
if I can figure out how to combine English writing
instruction with word-processing, graphics, and
internet literacy skills, the students should be
able to produce the next look book both ways- in
print and as an ezine. Stay tuned!
Julia
Karet
jkaret@chaffey.cc.ca.us
Writing
from the first Look Book project:
Friends
Around the World:
Writing
from the second Look Book project:
One
Language, Different Cultures:
(Published since this article was
written)
Writing
from the second Look Book project:
One
Language, Different Cultures:
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